#214:博物馆最好的资助方式

It is becoming increasingly expensive to keep museums open to public. What do you think is the best way of funding them( e.g. government, businesses or individuals)?

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学生的观点点评

学生的观点点评

A公司投资B提升公司文化内

涵收获社会好评C维持开放

这个和内涵有什么关系？

A：博物馆门票涨价 B：有更

多资金维护馆内展品C：减少

政府压力

完全跑题。

A政府对个人与企业进行了税收B有义务将税收资金投入公共服务，如博物馆的运营C政府财政出资不痛不痒的观点。为什么有义务放在博物馆，为什么将博物馆定义成公共服务？

A政府通过制定相关的法律和

增加文物保护的费用来保护博

物馆文物

题目没有说立法。跑题。

A 政府制定政策

B 扶持博物馆

C 减少博物馆开销为什么政府投资就可以减少开销？

A政府资助博物馆，B比较集中，管理比较合理，C资金利用率高难道不是私人企业管理更加合理吗？

A政府投资博物馆B成为新的旅游景点C带动经济发展观点缺乏唯一性。为什么其他人投资就不能成为景点？

开头段替换词

Expensive: costly

Keep museums open: keep museums running/operating

Public: members of public

The best way: the most important way, the ideal way

Funding them: financing them

开头段范例

Running museums is a costly business, either providing the public with free entry or charging admission fees. In my opinion, there is no one-size-fits-all approach for financing museums.

主体段一

A 政府资助

B 一些具备重大意义的博物馆可以有充分的资金

C 博物馆哪怕亏损也要运转下去

背景：有些博物馆可能没有吸引广泛观众的活动或展品，但它们的作用是不断提醒人们记住一些历史人物或重要的过去事件。

举例：一些博物馆收藏了战争英雄的私人物品

解释（B-C）：这些博物馆可以通过展示为祖国牺牲生命的人们的勇敢来促进爱国

对比：没有国家的支持，这些博物馆关闭是不可避免的，不受游客或私人投资者的欢迎

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主体段二

A 公司资助

B 有一定市场价值的博物馆可以自给自足

C 减少政府负担

背景：私营企业以利润为导向，对市场趋势和消费者未满足的需求非常敏感。

解释：投资博物馆的藏品和主题吸引那些愿意花钱去这些地方参观的人。

举例：太空科学、体育和电影制作的发展

解释（B-C）：有管理技能，私人企业可以为参观博物馆增加娱乐和付费服务，从而提高博物馆的盈利能力

对比：减轻政府的负担

拓展思路:

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主体段三

自我实现：A个人资助 B 满足个人的需求和爱好 C 不应该用社会的资源

背景：一些富人可能会从经营博物馆中获得成就感，展示自己私人收藏和爱好

解释（B-C）：这些博物馆可能很有趣，但不一定有文化价值

举例：展示玩具、邮票、家具、纺织品等的博物馆

对比：把公共资金分配给这些博物馆没有道理

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结尾段

In conclusion, there is no one-word answer to the question of what is the best way to finance a museum. It depends on the cultural and economic value of the items that are on display in museuems.

#84:学生是不是可以评论和批评老师

To improve the quality of education,people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticise their teachers .Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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开头段范例

Schools are sometimes advised to allow students to give comments about and even point out the mistakes of teachers in order to improve the standard of education. I agree with this proposed change, as long as it is managed well.

主体段二

A 学生评估老师

B 鼓励孩子挑战老师的权威 C不尊重老师，老师很难维持纪律，教育质量不好

解释（A-B）：学生觉得老师肯定有很多问题

解释（A-B）：学生觉得自己有能力或者知识去评判老师

解释（B-C）：蓄意打断，很难专注

拓展思路:

词伙:

范文:

学生观点点评

学生的观点点评

学生不应该评估和批评老师，老师有经验和知识，学生能系统掌握知识没有逻辑。第二个句子更像是一个背景，和系统掌握知识没有联系。

不应该鼓励学生评价老师，课堂上失去纪律，树立老师的威信，提升教育质量逻辑混乱。既然学生都不评价，为什么还失去纪律？

A评估老师 B老师针对给差评的学生C影响师生关系教学质量降低这个观点不是很有力。因为评估可以是匿名的。

A鼓励学生批评老师 B老师文明理性教学 C师生都进步观点不够有力。难道很多老师是不文明教学？

开头段替换词

Improve the quality of education: the standard of education, improve teaching outcomes Encourage students: invite students

Evaluate: assess, give comments about, give feedback about

Criticise: complain about, raise questions about

Result in: lead to, cause, give rise to

A loss of respect and discipline: disrespectful and unruly behaviour

主体段三

A 学生评判老师

B 有助于他们反思老师讲的东西

C 有助于深入了解内容

解释（A-B）：评判老师鼓励学生用批判的眼光去听讲，去做作业，去看答案

解释（B-C）：老师如果能够解释，解决学生的质疑，学生就会更加明白

解释（B-C）：老师也有压力多备课，来回应学生的问题

拓展思路:

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结尾段范例

论述类可以不写结尾段

主体段一

A 写评价

B 让老师知道自己的问题，调整教育

C 教学质量变好

解释（必要性）：老师的教学方式和内容和课后作业等，未必适合学生

解释（B-C）：调整之后，方便孩子更加容易理解

解释（B-C）：改变教育方法，组织一些团队活动，使用一些电脑去放videos吸引孩子

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#95:传统的想法是不是能够帮助现在的年轻人？

The older generation has very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behaviour. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generation to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some people have doubts about whether the traditional views of elderly people about lifestyles and behavioural norms can help young people to deal with demands of modern life. I believe that some seemingly old-fashioned ideas remain valuable in today’s world. (7)

The world is changing fast and older people’s suggestions may not be useful in modern societies. However, I believe that young people can draw upon the experience of the older generation if they want to handle some challenges of modern life. （7）

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学生的观点点评

学生的观点点评

长辈的传统的想法，有正确的价值观，成熟的世界观，对于不健康的不好的事物有足够的克制力，有利于年轻人年走上正确的道路，减少犯罪的发生有很多比较空泛的概念，譬如说世界观，不清楚是什么意思。

A 老一辈生活经历丰富

B 可以与年轻人分享经验

C 对年轻人有帮助跑题。这个题目不是简单写老人和年轻人的区别，只讨论“对于生活方式、思维方式和行为方式的传统看法”，而且也比较具体地说到了“为现代生活做准备”，而不只是“对年轻人有帮助”。

开头段替换词

The older generation: elderly people

Traditional ideas: conventional ideas, traditional views about Correct ways of life: the correct ways to live one’s life

Thinking: ways to deal with problems

Behaviour: rules of behaviour, behavioural norms

Not helpful: useless, impractical, unimportant

The younger generation: young people

Prepare for modern life: cope with the demands of modern life

主体段一

A 老年人的看法强调遵守规则B大家认可的行为 C 在现代社会更加和人有很好的关系，很好的立足解释（B-C）：强调对人要礼貌，要尊重别人，要懂得互助互利

具体化C：得到别人的帮助，更加好处理问题，事业成功

举例：遵守职场的规则，得到上司的认同和同事的尊重

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主体段二

A 老年人遵守传统

B 规避风险 C很好的立足

解释（A-B）：传统就是挫折和失败中总结的经验教训

解释（B-C）：避免浪费，做好计划，更好的处理一些危机

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主体段三

A 传统的想法比较刻板

B 不喜欢改变 , 没有创新

C 很难在现在社会上立足

解释（A-B）：世界是改变的，很多传统的东西现在已经被人鄙视

解释（B-C）：年轻人需要审时度势，不断改变思维，才可以生存

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结尾段范例

In conclusion, I believe that young people should respect traditions, especially the conventional ways of handling social responsibilities and managing risks, although sometimes traditions may stifle innovation.

#296:贫富差距的原因和解决方法

The gap between rich and poor is becoming wider, the rich richer, the poor even poorer. What has caused this problem and how to solve this problem?

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开头段范例

Income inequality has become a severe problem in some societies. I believe that this problem is attributed to the lack of educational opportunities and business opportunities among disadvantaged people. The government should take action to address the underlying cause of poverty.

The widening wealth gap has become a growing problem in some societies. Understanding the causes of this issue can help find solutions to improve the situation.

学生的范文

学生的范文（7+）

The widening wealth gap has become a growing problem in some societies. Understanding the causes of this issue can help find solutions to improve the situation.

A 财富再分配不够好

B 富人可以不断赚钱，穷人没有什么机会

C 贫富差距越来越大

解释（A-B）：税收制度不够好，富人大部分的收入可以保持住，富人再投资

解释（A-B）：没有获得国家的帮助，生活成本高，剩下的钱很少

举例：，获得教育,想创业，但是没钱

The wealth disparity has become serious since the government does not have policies in place to achieve effective income redistribution. The country may not have fair tax policies, so the upper class can retain the majority of their income and reinvest their wealth in different projects to create substantial returns. In contrast, the state does not provide sufficient financial support, such as low-cost medical care and transportation, to the working class; therefore, disadvantaged people have limited disposable income after paying for living expenses. This means that they have no money to pursue a degree for better job opportunities or to set up a business to increase earnings, even though they spot a valuable opportunity. This is why low-income groups are unable to keep pace with the wealthiest members of society.

A 福利更好 B穷人会减少生活成本 C 贫富差距减少

背景：富人要交更多税

解释（A-B）：少花钱在孩子的学费上，交通，水电，医疗上

解释（B-C）：学习新的技能，购买房子，做一些投资

To narrow the wealth gap, the best method is possibly to increase the expenditure on public services. This requires the government to impose a higher income tax on the rich people and gain more financial resources, thereby providing subsidies for the provision of education, transportation, utilities and healthcare. The low-income people can reduce the spending on these expenses, and have more spare money. They can use their savings to acquire job skills to improve employment prospects, buy their own home to maintain the buying power of their money, and make investments to maximise wealth.

In conclusion, taxation policies may be the primary cause of economic divide and the main solution to this problem is to implement a tax reform and require the affluent to pay more tax.