第一部分标题

Part I Guidelines：

1）Short and concise（简明扼要）：Write in one line (not a sentence); not containing an active verb; not exceeding 25 words or 120-140 letters and

spaces; no abbreviations or chemical symbols except those that are generally accepted, e.g. DNA, RNA, AIDS, CT, etc.;

2）Informative（信息丰富）：State exactly what you want the reader to know about your paper and your work;

3）Indexing（便于索引）：Pack as many key words or indexing terms as possible into the title without overloading it; key words not in the title will

be in the abstract or can go in the "Key Words" section of the paper; key

words are usually in the beginning or ending place of the title.

Correct the following titles according to the guidelines：

1）视网膜小血管变化是冠状动脉疾病的一个指标

Original: Retinal arteriolar changes are an indicator of coronary artery

disease

Revised: Retinal arteriolar changes as an indicator of coronary artery

disease

2) 用大剂量氨甲喋呤治疗急性淋巴细胞白血病的初步体会

Original: Preliminary experience in using high dose of methotrexate to

treat ALL

Revised: High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia

或：Use of high dose methotrexate in (the) treatment of acute lymphocytic leukemia

3) 关于饮食中钾含量与血压关系的研究

Original: A research of the relationship between the content of potassium in diet and blood pressure

Revised: Dietary potassium and blood pressure

Part II Subtitles

为了满足标题写作的上述，有时对较长标题可采用副标题（subtitle）处理，如出现：

1)病例数时

对急症室连续170例腹痛病例的回顾性研究

Original: A retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases of abdominal

pain in the emergency room

Revised: Abdominal pain in the emergency room: Retrospective study

of 170 consecutive cases

2)研究性质/方法时

用磁共振成象术对正常怀孕期间垂体增大进行活体内研究

Original: Use MRI (magnetic resonance imaging)to conduct an in vivo

study on the enlargement of the pituitary gland during normal pregnancy Revised: Pituitary gland growth during normal pregnancy: An in vivo

study using magnetic resonance imaging

3)并列结构时

军队卫生防疫工作中出现的问题、原因与对策的初探

Original: A preliminary study on the problems, causes and countermeasures in health and epidemic prevention work of CPLA

Revised: Military health and epidemic prevention: Problems, causes and countermeasures

4)解释性用词时

一例系统性红斑狼疮出现胰腺炎病例报告及文献综述

Original: A case report of SLE appearing pancreatitis and review of literatures

Revised: Pancreatitis in systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE): A case report and review of the literature

5)提问或选择时

听诊器是潜在的医院感染源吗？

Original: Is stethoscope a potential source of nosocomial infection?

Revised: Stethoscope: a potential source of nosocomial infection?

Part III Waste Words

Study of; Report of; Investigation of; Some thoughts on; A few observations

on; Association between; The relationship between

Part IV Pattern of Titles

短语型标题

1）名词+介词短语

遗传性血管性水肿所致的周期性腹痛

Recurrent abdominal pain due to hereditary angioedema

2) 名词+分词短语

霍奇金病放射治疗引起的甲状腺癌

Thyroid carcinoma induced by irradiation for Hodgkin’s Disease 利用高分辨率高光谱成像进行正常皮肤与黑色素瘤的鉴别

Differentiation of normal skin and melanoma using high resolution hyperspectral imaging

3) 名词+动词不定式

检测女性冠状动脉疾病的目前诊断观念

Current diagnostic concepts to detect coronary artery disease in women

4) 名词+同位结构

庆大霉素是分离p-溶血性链球菌的选择性药物

Gentamicin, a selective agent for the isolation of betahemolytic streptococci

5) 动名词短语

精神分裂症门诊治疗效果测定

Measuring the quality of outpatient treatment for schizophrenia

6) 介词短语

控制直肠癌的探讨

On controlling rectal cancer

完整句标题

良性乳腺疾病的女性面临更高的癌变风险

Women with benign breast face high cancer risk.

疑问句句式标题

1）省略作用词式标题

格雷夫斯眼病中是细胞调节免疫还是体液免疫起作用？

Cell-mediated or humoral immunity in Graves’ ophthamopathy? 2）完整结构标题

肿瘤依赖于血管发生的证据是什么？

What is the evidence that tumors are angiogenesis dependent?

Part VI Frequently Used Patterns

1）表示药物治疗的标题句式

药物名称+in (或for)+病名

药物名称+in the treatment (或management) of+病名

药物名称+therapy (或treatment) of +病名

Treatment of +病名+with+药物名称

Use of 药物名称+in the treatment of+病名

2）表示非药物治疗方法的标题句式

治疗方法+ for (或in)+病名

治疗方法+ in the treatment (或management) of+病名

Treatment of +病名+ by +治疗方法

3）表示诊断方法的标题句式

诊断方法+in+病名

诊断方法+in the diagnosis of+病名

Detection of +某种成分+in+病名

Diagnosis of 病名+by (或with) +诊断方法

Application of +诊断方法+to the diagnosis of +病名